new story no title yet plz read
 

Chapter 1


I don't know where to start. I would start at thee end but i have't gotten there yet. And unlike most storys this one has no opening, no beginning. So i will start with today, today i gave up, today i finally understood the meaning of helplessness. Today i was raped. Don't be shocked. It happens all the time all over the world. It's not the first time it's happend to me and it won't be the last. I've gotten used to it. I've learned to drift away. to go numb. to cease to fuction. But today, being raped is not the thing that shocked me the most. The thing that shocked me the most, and perhaps made me decide to sit down amd write this, was the fact that as i was lying under my attacker, whose name will not be mentioned here, i saw my mother. The funny thing is my mother has been dead for 5 years. Now it could have just been my imagination but i doubt it. But i've learned not to doubt anything anymore. See my best friend is, well, non-existant, at least that's what everyone thinks. But i know she's real just like i know my mother is real and i intend to prove it.

Ok its not a full chapter but i want to know if anyones even intrested so lemme know and if even one person is ill continue it. if not then ill just stop

thanks

I like it for the most part. A couple punctuation things that bug me (cause I'm a grammar/spelling/punctuation freakazoid), but I think it's really good. I need to read more to be able to tell you if I like it or not, but so far, I like it. Keep it up!

sounds good wanna read more

it sounds good
keep going :)

I like it, its intriguing. But..you need to work on capitlization, grammar, etc. =D

Otherwise..good stuff. =)