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Sophie.x 14-03-2008 07:29 PM

Simple - a poem i have written
 



I’m just a simple girl
A girl that is fed up of all the lies
A girl that has had enough of the rumors
A girl that has given up on fighting her battles
A girl that can’t wait to leave and start a new
I’m just a simple girl
A girl who has learnt from her mistakes
A girl who is ready to move on
A girl who tries not to get complicated
A girl that has secretly failed
I’m just a simple girl
A girl that has suffered enough
A girl that can’t stop thinking about what went wrong
A girl that wants to leave them all behind
A girl that can no longer trust a sole
I’m just a simple girl
A girl that refuses to give up
A girl that won’t let others get in the way
A girl that has had enough of things going wrong
I’m just a simple girl
Or at least that what I want them to believe.


just a little poem i wrote, i hope you liked it and please feel free to comment.
x

Buttons. 14-03-2008 08:08 PM

To be honest the repetitive use of the word girl kind of put me off hun, but otherwise it is good

MissFit 14-03-2008 11:37 PM

Buttons (: You're one of the few people I've met that's seen Rent. x

And Sophie - I like the poem. It's good. I'm not a fan of poems that don't rhyme, but this one, idk. I like it (:

loveyoux


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