not entirely sure about this one.
 

your attention tastes like sunshine,
thats what i remember most
and how pretty you looked with my words
spilled all over you
we never cared much about the mess.
i've been lead to believe there is no place in the summer
for my fingers
but your curls
but now the sun is coming back
and your entwined
with other girls
who i'm sure can't appreciate
the brilliance of your bed sheets
with our names magic markered
on the seams.
there is something so lonely
about my crazy-lady bathrobe
when you're not tugging on the tie.

you write really well, this poem is beautiful. i love the first two lines the most, because i know that feeling...

aww this is really loverly sweetie
*cuddles tight*

take care hun
much love
katy
xx

You express yourself really well, there is a lovely flow to this.

Sian
xxx

damn girl.
this doesn't seem to have the same sound of many of your other poems, don't really know how to describe it, but often what you write would sound incredible even if it was all gibberish and had no meaning.
this makes up for anything it lacks in that area in MEANING. i LOVE every single line of this. i cant even...just every line made me want to read the next, and every completed thought made me smile.
just inspiring