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fakesmiler 06-03-2008 04:50 AM

poems
 
hey, once again i cant sleep! so ive decided 2 share some more of my poems, comments always welcum! rach x x

Cutters Wish- Fakesmiler

Underneath the smile,
cracks will appear
the desire to run a mile
and the want to dissapear

Inside your screaming
but you keep it within
sit there dreaming
and taking it out on your skin

hoping this will be the final time
that you have to turn to a blade
you're done with this big mime
wishing that, away you will fade

this time will be different
your not just going for a scar
you press down real hard
you want to go to far

away from this world
finally your free
one day this story
will hopefully be me.

Attention seeking Harmer

People stair at the scars
its like a massive warning
stay away shes crazy!
while the ideas dawning

But they never seen to see
the person behind the cut
that person there is ME
but they just sign and tut

Attention is the reason
thats what they think
they've made up there mind already
the ideas perminatly sink

But if they could just open there minds
and notice its july
and pick up on my signs
im wearing a long sleeved top

the sun is beatin down
and still im fully covered
but no they sit and frown
as my sleeve slips down

and they see
scars all up my arm

i completely disapear,
theres no real me
all they see is the scars
and some alien from mars

if they just considered life
even for a second
understand my need for a knife

people like me done belong in society
wish they'd go away
stop making a fuss

Dont worry i sit and think
that makes two of us.

Schleier von Dunst 06-03-2008 08:07 AM

Well done they are fantastic!! I can relate to the second right through. It's great!! Well done, keep writing :-)

Sian 06-03-2008 01:43 PM

I love both of those. I really identify with them.

Sian
xxx

fakesmiler 10-03-2008 04:48 AM

thanks both means alot :) x x


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