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Kira 01-03-2008 12:43 PM

Beautiful Knife *SI/SUICIDE/TOOLS*
 
Beautiful Knife.
Glorious Knife.
The red glistening in the light,
Of the blue moon that night.

The boy he cut,
He slit,
He stabbed.
Red Rivers flowing.

Hate.
Dark.
Death.

His body slumped,
Against an old brick wall,
It grew colder,
Colder by the second.

The boy stiffened,
His short life at an end,
His great suffering,
All at an end.

~~Kirsty~~ 01-03-2008 02:57 PM

i like this and it's well written it has a lot of emotion in it. xx

Tweetyluver07 01-03-2008 07:56 PM

i like it.. a lot.
its written with details which create a picture in your mind.. i like it.

Schleier von Dunst 01-03-2008 10:12 PM

That's amazing...I have to say, its kinda similar to one i wrote a while ago...


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