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My Poems (may become triggering at some point)
Inner-Child. What is set before me? The grinding crunch of life? Or am i made to follow suit and replicate this knife? I lie to draw these lines, I twist and burn inside, The flames they lick me dry To condemn what is my pride. The corner is quivering, with the shadow of a soul, Familiarity reaches me, a past life so sad and cold. If only i could reach her, comfort in some way, pierce heart with happyness set the fear at bay. Deliver spirit to my heart, let it rip and shread and bleed, you cannot reach me with your mind but damage with your greed. I see my inner child i try but fail to save if only i could pause this search and trust in what i crave. My childhood ways are gone reclaim, control, enlight a light shines upon us now it shows my truth my sight. constuctive critism welcome, i'm always looking to improve :) ohh and there will be more to come. xxx |
Fuel this flame Come now flame engulf me cleanse me with your flame wash away my sins, my soul deliver me from pain. Illuminate the darkness power through in turn see the ashes float and fall feel the fire burn. Straying out of sanity abandon me with fright let my mind die once more shield me from this sight. The match it yearns this strike so close, too far from me please catch the embers with your glow smouldering i am free |
Wow, these are amazing. I like the Inner Child one particuarly. There is a strength in these poems which I love. You write really well.
Sian xxx |
Thankyou :)
xxx |
Fate The waiting is consuming me erase my fractured soul, I can't pretend this dignity my blood runs cold, un-whole. Will this nightmare end? as i flicker in the dark, the shadows morphed like blades, to drip the blood i mark. I am fading, lost and empty, in a world with harshing sight deliver me from tempting fate, and save my heart tonight. Yet again you fail to see, the dying of my mind, your future though uncertain, is damned and born to bind. Please take away this sterling, the silver grasp you hold, and set me free to ease my ache but do not bent or fold. So with this pain i leave, to tempt my hand at fate, for i now know you cannot kill what you did not create. |
wow that was amazing.
its got a real maturity to it. nice useage of words. |
Lullaby We breath to live, we live to see i ache to die. Sing to me suicide let the melody cry listen, the sound it drifts so far watch the notes they fly. Beam through my mind, discover in my sleep find the tune i lack within demolish me so deep. remove from my fictitious mind, the blade i hold so dear, replace it with your brutal kiss breath away the fear whisper to my soul, your suicidal lullaby feel my pulse drum slow come take me as i die. |
Ignorance They follow as the rainbow blends aside we watch with hope, uncover their uniqueness find some way to cope. Eyes are ruled be blindness programmed minds the same, reveal to them our difference ruined with lasting pain. Let them watch me bleed mark upon their inocence show how pain should feel murder with their dominance. Shine into their souls the truth but always miss, encourage them with sight IGNORANCE IS NOT BLISS. (theres probably loads of spelling mistakes in this!) |
Revenge The deed will be done revenge i will serve i trust you feel it coming you'll get what you deserve. Your dreams i will haunt your waking moments to echoe through the silence get whats coming to you. Give me reason not to act beg for your life, Sorry? i think not your heart i will dice. Across my bitter flesh your blood will be spilled but suicide may follow knowing i have killed. You cannot escape me Laughter as you cry feel the pain of my ache tonight you must die! |
OMG.
JOJO. THEY'RE 'MAZING! i LOVE lullaby & revenge. iloveyou awoahssssssss! |
YAY! thankyou amyzzz!!!! i lovesyou like AWOAHWOAHSSS
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Np.
Cuz They're Mazing And Imcredible. And Wonderful. |
oh amyz you're so nice :)
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OMGz Jojo they're like awesome and 'mazing like awoahwoahs!!!
Seriously they're really really REALLY good My faves are inner child and revenge :-) |
Thankyou Hannahz!:-)
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Pretty lie ugly truth Abandon your search I'm not worth the fight Repulse on me leave with fright. My sins pushed too far Disgusting, evil lies Don't try to love me not worthy of your time. I deserve this deserve to bleed i must feel the pain for my evil deeds. Discriminate me hate me forget me. Slip the blade like ice hideous flesh it rips, splurge this crimson as it drips. I must repent be made to die Vicious is my soul another pretty lie. |
Fragile Dreams I dream of a place where fear is at bay sacrafice myself its the price i pay. Beneath my skin i itch itch to be free bleed to be saved. Not yet done with fiction escape my path with lies mind once fogged, now i see to believe i must survive. Hope is fading fear crying lighting embers slowly dying. Help shines through my fragile dreams drifting as with sand not what it seems. |
Some of these are really quite good. :)
I was wondering if you'd be willing to have any of them submitted into April's eZine? We could be doing with a few poems, and these would go well I believe. x |
"sing me to suicide" wow. I wish i thought of that...*jealous* lol xx<3xx
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