Secrets Veiled
 

Sitting there blocking out
Noises coming from the room around
In my own dark, lonely world
Lonely but full of people

A pang of pain drives into
My scarred and hurtful heart
Stays there like it's hooked and barbed
Will not leave me be

I drag myself home
And know what awaits in my cosy lonely world
It involves steel and tissues and blood
Lots of blood

I sit in comfort
Curled up
Im pushing out the pain from my heart
With the pain of a razorblade.

And i go through the next day
Abuse being hurled at me
Still living in my world
Living a different life on the outside

They seem like they will never go
these infernal marks
like Lady Macbeth's spot
And so i shed tears

To know that the pains
The lies
The memories
Will never cease...


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i have a link to another 10 i wrote so PM me if u like this and ill send it to you

Anyone? please tell me if it sucks

It doesn't suck at all Ollie! I like the imagery in it, it creates such an impact!
I hope you're okay.
Kiran
xx

well seeing as noone else is commenting heres the link to the other 10

*SOME TRIGGERING SI/SUICIDE*

http://www.bebo.com/my-only-escape

i havent added any for ages but i have a couple up my sleeve

hey ollie they dont suck

i really like them have u got music to any of them???

Amy

Those ones are just poems, but i have some songs written with my band, there are some lyrics to a current one on CC, i posted them this morning, take a look
ill try and make a site for mp3s when i record them, ill let you know

thanks
x

ollie the poems also would be realy good songs

i would really like to listen to your songs when u record them

looking forward to them

Amy

well, on the 22nd were gna have a rehearsal, so ill record it on my phone, and upload it onto here
it wont be good qual. but itll be nice to have a carbon copy rather than a memory