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12-02-2008, 10:47 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Mill Hill, London
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Triggering (SI) - Secrets Veiled
Sitting there blocking out
Noises coming from the room around
In my own dark, lonely world
Lonely but full of people
A pang of pain drives into
My scarred and hurtful heart
Stays there like it's hooked and barbed
Will not leave me be
I drag myself home
And know what awaits in my cosy lonely world
It involves steel and tissues and blood
Lots of blood
I sit in comfort
Curled up
Im pushing out the pain from my heart
With the pain of a razorblade.
And i go through the next day
Abuse being hurled at me
Still living in my world
Living a different life on the outside
They seem like they will never go
these infernal marks
like Lady Macbeth's spot
And so i shed tears
To know that the pains
The lies
The memories
Will never cease...
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i have a link to another 10 i wrote so PM me if u like this and ill send it to you
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13-02-2008, 05:36 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Mill Hill, London
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Anyone? please tell me if it sucks
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Enemy - Show me what you wanna be, I can handle anything, even if i can't handle you. Readily - Either way it better be, don't you f*cking pity me. Get up, get off
If you fear death, it proves you have a life worth living that you want to live.
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13-02-2008, 05:49 PM
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Never forgetting to be awesome
Join Date: Mar 2006
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It doesn't suck at all Ollie! I like the imagery in it, it creates such an impact!
I hope you're okay.
Kiran
xx
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13-02-2008, 07:08 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Mill Hill, London
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well seeing as noone else is commenting heres the link to the other 10
*SOME TRIGGERING SI/SUICIDE*
http://www.bebo.com/my-only-escape
i havent added any for ages but i have a couple up my sleeve
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Enemy - Show me what you wanna be, I can handle anything, even if i can't handle you. Readily - Either way it better be, don't you f*cking pity me. Get up, get off
If you fear death, it proves you have a life worth living that you want to live.
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13-02-2008, 08:52 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Perth, Australia
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hey ollie they dont suck
i really like them have u got music to any of them???
Amy
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13-02-2008, 08:57 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Mill Hill, London
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Originally Posted by dark_angel666
hey ollie they dont suck
i really like them have u got music to any of them???
Amy
Those ones are just poems, but i have some songs written with my band, there are some lyrics to a current one on CC, i posted them this morning, take a look
ill try and make a site for mp3s when i record them, ill let you know
thanks
x
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Enemy - Show me what you wanna be, I can handle anything, even if i can't handle you. Readily - Either way it better be, don't you f*cking pity me. Get up, get off
If you fear death, it proves you have a life worth living that you want to live.
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13-02-2008, 09:06 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: Perth, Australia
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ollie the poems also would be realy good songs
i would really like to listen to your songs when u record them
looking forward to them
Amy
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13-02-2008, 09:10 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Mill Hill, London
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well, on the 22nd were gna have a rehearsal, so ill record it on my phone, and upload it onto here
it wont be good qual. but itll be nice to have a carbon copy rather than a memory
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Enemy - Show me what you wanna be, I can handle anything, even if i can't handle you. Readily - Either way it better be, don't you f*cking pity me. Get up, get off
If you fear death, it proves you have a life worth living that you want to live.
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