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A poem I wrote when I was 14
I've never shown this to anyone. My psycologist when I was 14 ordered me to write something, so I did. So here it is, and I'm sorry if the English is a bit off, but I was 14 so whatevers... ^^
The girl who was afraid of the dark *********************************** So there was no puppy, u discovered as u got into the car And your heart was pumping fast as he drove u very far The cabin in the forest layd there waiting in the night And God saw u were fighting him with all your might But he locked u in the shed, and said u were his little girl And that u were never going back to the so called world So as the hours passed by, all the angels saw u cry Cuz he said that if u ran, ur little brothers' gonna die And the shed by the cabin was so dark and cold, But you did as u had been told Was gonna be his little doll until the bed turned into gold Your mind turned dark as he ****ed u on the bed And after hours went by, the bed went red But you'r mind werent there, it was far away With the dog u loved so dear, when u died, would he be ok? I dont know what ticked it of, and where the courage came from But when he carried u a second, u bit his arm And the angels pushed u out the door, and into the night And suddenly u forgot u were afraid of the dark So, u run little girl Dont let him get u Mummy's little sunshine's gonna make it, I bet u I know it's dark, and that the forest scares u But in there he wont find u, wont find u, wont find u |
that is really good; made me cry in a good way
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i think it shows a lot of emotion and i liked it
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