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The Girl Behind Her Window Pane
She sits and stares behind her window pane
The tears building in her eyes Needing a truth or something real But all she holds is lies She watches from her prison Begging for real affection The only other soul she sees is hers Her friend is her reflection The only words she hears are hers Whispering words unknown Calling for her Saviour But she knows there's no-one home Pain is all she's learnt to know The only thing she needs to feel To remind her not just torment runs through her veins To remind her she's still real Deeper and deeper she will go Red runs fast as she starts to weep The pain will only end for her Once she falls asleep She sits alone throughout the night And watches day start to break Another day to try and survive How she wishes she wasn't awake The morning sun shines through the window Bathing her in light She knows that she is still alone But has to keep up the fight Her visible scar will heal But the mental one still shows And from behind her little window pane About her daily life she goes xx |
im crying
wow |
I love it
Maybe you could show me some more of your stuff sometime Paul x |
its beautiful ♥
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Wow...This is incredible. There's so much emotion inside of this.
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LOVE it. totally reminds me of a piece i did
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that impressive it has to be said,
though i did think where u put she wishes she wasnt awake, i thought alive would have fitted better but thats me being picky. the poem is fabulous babe =D |
That was amazing.
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Brought me to tears its really good
-stef |
It reminds me of myself...Very interesting. I like how you speak in third person. It is a unique perspective. Well done. I cna feel the emotion in this.
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oh chels i love it :) xx
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