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DarkWhispers123 15-09-2013 11:57 PM

What's Left? (Poem)
 
What`s left?
Once you strip away the smiles
Strip away clothes
Strip away the make up
The jewelry
All the material things

What`s left?
When you strip away the computer
Strip away the online persona
Strip away the user name
Strip away everything online

What`s left?
When it is you yourself
Your true self
And no one else

What`s left?
When you face yourself
Face up to everything you`ve done
All the pain, hurt, strife, happiness, joy caused

What`s left?
When in the end
We all have to pay for our parts
What`s left?

When there is no one left
But yourself and you`re
All alone

what`s left then?

TheLoneWolf 16-09-2013 01:03 AM

This kinda gave me chills...good work. I hope you're okay? x

elle_babe 27-09-2013 06:16 PM

omg so so sad :-( so scary and so sad xx

Fire Fly 27-09-2013 06:17 PM

That's really good and so true in a way x

Rug 27-09-2013 11:44 PM

That's a powerful piece. I think about that a lot!

DarkWhispers123 02-10-2013 03:40 AM

Thanks


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