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AllButWanted 25-07-2013 01:26 AM

my latest poem :)
 
You fall against the wall and onto the floor
In your head you’re screaming I can’t take it no more
In the day you smile but you break down at night
you want to give in, give up the fight
you roll up your sleeve, take hold of the blade
look on your arm for where more scars can be made
you drag the blade across your skin again, and again
the crimson blood lets go of the anger the pain
you press down without any fears
each drop of blood replacing your silent tears
the beautiful mess you’ve now created on your arm
why on earth do you cause yourself this harm?
Please darling why can’t you look in the mirror and see
The amazing person that you can be?





i dont know if its very good :/

havealittlefaith 25-07-2013 06:44 AM

this is really good hun :)x

AllButWanted 25-07-2013 10:41 PM

thankk youu :)

TheLoneWolf 26-07-2013 01:26 AM

i can definitely relate to this, as i'm not creative i'd say you've put some of my thoughts into words :) x

AllButWanted 27-07-2013 08:24 AM

Im not too creative but sometimes the words for poems just come into my head so I write them into a poem.

HeartsCry 27-07-2013 06:45 PM

It's beautiful! :)

AllButWanted 29-07-2013 01:23 PM

thankk youu

errorartist 30-07-2013 05:12 PM

this is amazing.. i love it.

Kibou 05-08-2013 06:28 AM

So beautifully written

AllButWanted 08-08-2013 09:31 PM

thankk youu xx


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