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My Poems (may become triggering at some point)
Inner-Child. What is set before me? The grinding crunch of life? Or am i made to follow suit and replicate this knife? I lie to draw these lines, I twist and burn inside, The flames they lick me dry To condemn what is my pride. The corner is quivering, with the shadow of a soul, Familiarity reaches me, a past life so sad and cold. If only i could reach her, comfort in some way, pierce heart with happyness set the fear at bay. Deliver spirit to my heart, let it rip and shread and bleed, you cannot reach me with your mind but damage with your greed. I see my inner child i try but fail to save if only i could pause this search and trust in what i crave. My childhood ways are gone reclaim, control, enlight a light shines upon us now it shows my truth my sight. constuctive critism welcome, i'm always looking to improve :) ohh and there will be more to come. xxx |
Fuel this flame Come now flame engulf me cleanse me with your flame wash away my sins, my soul deliver me from pain. Illuminate the darkness power through in turn see the ashes float and fall feel the fire burn. Straying out of sanity abandon me with fright let my mind die once more shield me from this sight. The match it yearns this strike so close, too far from me please catch the embers with your glow smouldering i am free |
Wow, these are amazing. I like the Inner Child one particuarly. There is a strength in these poems which I love. You write really well.
Sian xxx |
Thankyou :)
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Fate The waiting is consuming me erase my fractured soul, I can't pretend this dignity my blood runs cold, un-whole. Will this nightmare end? as i flicker in the dark, the shadows morphed like blades, to drip the blood i mark. I am fading, lost and empty, in a world with harshing sight deliver me from tempting fate, and save my heart tonight. Yet again you fail to see, the dying of my mind, your future though uncertain, is damned and born to bind. Please take away this sterling, the silver grasp you hold, and set me free to ease my ache but do not bent or fold. So with this pain i leave, to tempt my hand at fate, for i now know you cannot kill what you did not create. |
wow that was amazing.
its got a real maturity to it. nice useage of words. |
Lullaby We breath to live, we live to see i ache to die. Sing to me suicide let the melody cry listen, the sound it drifts so far watch the notes they fly. Beam through my mind, discover in my sleep find the tune i lack within demolish me so deep. remove from my fictitious mind, the blade i hold so dear, replace it with your brutal kiss breath away the fear whisper to my soul, your suicidal lullaby feel my pulse drum slow come take me as i die. |
Ignorance They follow as the rainbow blends aside we watch with hope, uncover their uniqueness find some way to cope. Eyes are ruled be blindness programmed minds the same, reveal to them our difference ruined with lasting pain. Let them watch me bleed mark upon their inocence show how pain should feel murder with their dominance. Shine into their souls the truth but always miss, encourage them with sight IGNORANCE IS NOT BLISS. (theres probably loads of spelling mistakes in this!) |
Revenge The deed will be done revenge i will serve i trust you feel it coming you'll get what you deserve. Your dreams i will haunt your waking moments to echoe through the silence get whats coming to you. Give me reason not to act beg for your life, Sorry? i think not your heart i will dice. Across my bitter flesh your blood will be spilled but suicide may follow knowing i have killed. You cannot escape me Laughter as you cry feel the pain of my ache tonight you must die! |
OMG.
JOJO. THEY'RE 'MAZING! i LOVE lullaby & revenge. iloveyou awoahssssssss! |
YAY! thankyou amyzzz!!!! i lovesyou like AWOAHWOAHSSS
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Np.
Cuz They're Mazing And Imcredible. And Wonderful. |
oh amyz you're so nice :)
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OMGz Jojo they're like awesome and 'mazing like awoahwoahs!!!
Seriously they're really really REALLY good My faves are inner child and revenge :-) |
Thankyou Hannahz!:-)
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Pretty lie ugly truth Abandon your search I'm not worth the fight Repulse on me leave with fright. My sins pushed too far Disgusting, evil lies Don't try to love me not worthy of your time. I deserve this deserve to bleed i must feel the pain for my evil deeds. Discriminate me hate me forget me. Slip the blade like ice hideous flesh it rips, splurge this crimson as it drips. I must repent be made to die Vicious is my soul another pretty lie. |
Fragile Dreams I dream of a place where fear is at bay sacrafice myself its the price i pay. Beneath my skin i itch itch to be free bleed to be saved. Not yet done with fiction escape my path with lies mind once fogged, now i see to believe i must survive. Hope is fading fear crying lighting embers slowly dying. Help shines through my fragile dreams drifting as with sand not what it seems. |
Some of these are really quite good. :)
I was wondering if you'd be willing to have any of them submitted into April's eZine? We could be doing with a few poems, and these would go well I believe. x |
"sing me to suicide" wow. I wish i thought of that...*jealous* lol xx<3xx
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Decayed Abating from first to last Severe muted silence Losing faith, letting go Sense no love no guidance. Persecute throughout my time Dispose of what remains Repel away my carcass Discount my dying pain. Decomposing, mutilation Cuts carved raw Rot to the core. Spill the residue of my life Determine if you wish, Why this damage lies so deep Why these scars don’t miss. Devoured by the earth blaring through these tears resisting help dying with these fears. |
Demons hour of darkness Darkness has loomed Unleashing hells disciples Sensing human pulses Stopped by none or rifles. Sinister weapons hidden Whilst victims learn to trust Hidden faces, revealing traces Dripping blood they lust. Disbelieve your doom Convinced in fiction lies Horror edging closer Realise you will die. Cadavers left to perish No glory for the dead Demon boundaries open Yet again they have fed. |
Lake Insanity Submerged one last time Bounded water grave Surrender your corpse Tolerate the pain Breathe in all that’s wrong Deplete of all that’s true Loaded pressure forcing Captivating you. Pool filled by tears Dismal shadows cast Rejected by nature Her victim not the last. Corrupted mentality Flooding in my mind Air once so pure Proving hard to find. Descend into darkness Held down by gravity Prepare to feel the wrath Of lake insanity. |
Give up the ghost Closing my eyes to obscurity Daring to dream Grasping modest bliss Permitting lights to beam. Roused to what’s existent Distressed by what i see A soul yearning life Knowing what should be. Must i value my life? Or can i have the power To utilize this blade Encourage my soul to cower. Slipping once again Dreams in which i die Then my time will shine Against a blood red sky. |
Hatred My thoughts won’t revolutionize A malicious fever grows Ablaze within my mind Emerging lava flows. Skin slashed of my frame Leaks polluted blood Restricted by this cleanse Fading if I could. Revulsion of me Hide my filthy traits Invisible i wish to be With hate i pursue my fate. Discontinued questions No more truth of me Crying silent tears A future i can’t see. Familiarity so distant Alone i once tried To triumph over me Still i had to lie. Disregard myself I can’t bear to glance At the shattered glass below me I have used my final chance. |
Mental cave Nothing is right No one is real Harshly silenced From the pain i feel. Trapped behind these walls No reason for grace No purpose in pain No motive to face. Smothering in my skin Struggling to breathe Difficulty finding faith With each breath i take. Is there anyone out there? Call upon the spirits Find more empty souls Sick of their gimmicks. Hidden tears shed Unable to break through The mental cave i hate My time over due. Scale the walls Scream shout cry Words meaning nothing Trying to justify. Will this defeat me? Can it take my life? I laid the foundations Gave away the knife. |
Mentally split So peaceful Calming elation Floating through time With little duration. Look what you made me do You ****ing bitch I’ll make you bleed Make you plead. Verbal so pure Elegance with grace Dreaming through life With a steady pace. Took over my senses Made me lose control Retarded **** Your head will roll. Swimming in ecstasy Mind starts to find Split personalities Beginning to bind. Warmth of light Burn of fire Truth with sight Hells desire. |
wow! there all really good!
couldnt pick a favourite there all amazing! x |
aww thankyou:)
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this has no title and it's pretty crappy.
So many lies So much destruction Too much pain. Trying to rationalize my mind Corrupted system failing Weakening as i fall. Play my role in obscenity Feeling the wrath of your weight Silver gripping tightly Around my minds gate. This is bliss This is fear This i won’t miss. Survival of the fittest you say To die is my only chance Loosened as i fall Alone i will crawl to my destiny |
Breathless I’m running
Escape the fear inside Looming is the day With my blood i will pay. Enticement holds the blade Tempting with its gleam Why defeat the object With life so un-clean. Longing for this ache Fake my way through pain Take away my tool Force my mind to train. |
These are some older poems that i posted on seperate threads, but cuz that was ages ago i thought i'd put them on here.
Death Becomes Me Why does it hurt so bad? Why do i cry? How could i enlight myself? How could i lie? Beneath the frayed shine, inside my dammed reflection, i hide what you don't see, the emptyness in me. Why do i do this? Why do i try? How could i belive that i could not die. I bear the scars that hold the truth, it takes one catch to know, that blood runs cold and stained from me, my heart it beats so slow. Each breath i hold does not gain, but releases evil, whispered pain. Why do i pretend? Why do i lie? How could i erase my soul believing it must die. I am but of darkness i feel no shining light, the light in which i see how little i mean to me. I hate why i do this, how my hearts deprived, and through the shattered glass i see, the fear has arrived. The peices of me have fallen unfixable at least, and yet i feel no peace, the pain it drives to deep. Death Becomes Me. Echoed Silence. I cant' survive In this cave, In this shell, With this soul. My helpless pleas, Fall on dry hearts, while i search, Search to find the piece, The piece of me i lack. The echoed silence hear's, and screams with dying hope. This battle is failing, Falling, Gone. My will to live has broken, snapped i half by force. So i return, return to my destiny, which lies... within that cave. and in that shell, with that soul I cry I bleed I die Broken nothingness You tie me up and bind the rope You send the dreaded fear. I fall into the deathtrap The misery grows deeper. Your naked soul whitnesses, My ache and my grief, I see know more i feel know more condemn my soul to death. Oh please stop this torture, this mangeled web of pain, fix my heart, fix my mind, fix my soul today. My life is but of darkness, i long for warming light, a light to give me freedom, a light to give me flight. My soul torn to pieces, my body still intact, for how can skin posess, a broken nothingness. (untitled) My invisible eyes whitness the pain the pain from my heart, the ripping, the shredding the bruising. The healed scars lay deeply behind this emotionless shell. How can life be what it seems when nothing is real. Please wake me from this nightmare, take me from this prison, free me from this delusion that is my life. insanitys laughing at perseption of normality im breaking.. SAVE MY SOUL! |
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