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(poem) Untitled.
So this poem needs work. Comment critisizem and suggestions please. =)
You built me up to break me
To make me in your image
Mold me into your statue
Spread me thin and paint me out
Hold me safe with your warm eyes
Made me feel so full of love
I was your girl, your sweetheart
I remember your soft low singing
"Sometimes it snows in April"
Your singing made me warm
Now i'm always cold
And now I can hear the rain
It bashes against my window
Its not soft and low like your voice
Its harsh and violent, scratching to get in
Until it cracked releasing you
Everything you had made me up to be
My life got washed away by that rain
I'm too far in, try to rescue me now
Save me from this life you gave me
Make it better with your deep humming
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