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Old 18-08-2010, 05:23 PM   #1
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Lost but never forgotten - Poem PLEASE COMMENT

Lost but never forgotten

My heart still aches wit Sadness

The secret tears still flow

What it meant to love and lose you

You will never know

Your resting place I visit

Your flowers I place with care

But


No one knows the heartache

As I turn and leave you there.



A hand to hold,
A smile to see,
A simple dream
That I am free.
No pain to feel,
More love to give,
No tears to dry,
I want to live


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Old 18-08-2010, 05:35 PM   #2
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I really like this, it's heartfelt and emotional. I am sorry for your loss. *Hugs*






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Old 19-08-2010, 05:44 PM   #3
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This is such an amazing poem. I love your poetry! =)



"Wish that I could cry,
Fall apon my knees,
Find a way to lie,
About the home I'll never see"
Superman by Five For Fighting

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Old 21-08-2010, 02:22 AM   #4
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this is beautiful, i really like it :)

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