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Old 12-04-2008, 02:21 PM   #61
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This is good hun, would love to read some more

Good luck with getting everything done before graduation and congrats



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Old 16-04-2008, 10:12 PM   #62
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I took this other story out because it was out of place and kinda unexpected. Sorry about that. :P


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"Let's go to Tokyo!"
Me:"Tokyo? But what about Japan?"
"Mer, you idiot...Tokyo is in Japan."
Me:"Really? Since when? OH...damn it..."
"How the hell do you have an IQ over 170?"
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Old 16-04-2008, 10:47 PM   #63
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i LOVE the story you are writing
it is truely amazing ! :)
keep up the good work hunn
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Old 07-05-2008, 08:05 PM   #64
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Arhen and I remained in our kiss for a while, but a sudden scream soon interrupted our passionate lock.

"Dan!" Sara screamed, her voice dripping with frustration, "why the hell did you do that?"

I turned my head to see a fuming Sara treading in the water. It seems that Dan decided to pull Sara into the lake with the rest of us. Looks like happy time is over for that couple.

"Was that really necessary?" Arhen asked, releasing me from his embrace. "She's all wet now..."

"No ****, Sherlock!" Sara grumbled, knocking water out of her ears. "Now what am I going to do..."

"I just wanted you to be closer to me, Angel," Dan smiled, his eyes gleaming. Sara couldn't refuse that look, not now, not ever. The anger she had immediatly drained from her body, filling with happiness and passion. "That is why I pulled you in here..."

'Aw, Dan," Sara stuttered, swimming torwards him, wrapping her arms around his neck. "I can never stay mad at you."

I never quite understood their relationship...it was so different than mine and even more than Mer's. Their relationship is so emotionally dominating that we hardly see them hug let alone kiss. They are in love with each other's minds that physical connetions seem almost pointless. Mer and Seb are two powerful individuals. As passionate as they both are, their relationship drips with competition, whether it be tests of strength or mind trips. Ahren and I have so much in common, but not too much, which I am quite grateful for. It is always fun learning about a person. Of course, with that being said, our relationship is also riddled with deep, dark secrets that would be unbelievibly terrible if they found their way out...

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I think I might be addicted to Domo-kun.
"Let's go to Tokyo!"
Me:"Tokyo? But what about Japan?"
"Mer, you idiot...Tokyo is in Japan."
Me:"Really? Since when? OH...damn it..."
"How the hell do you have an IQ over 170?"
Me:"Oh, shut it!"

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Old 07-05-2008, 08:10 PM   #65
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love love love this!
truely amazing , can't wait for more!
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Old 07-05-2008, 08:20 PM   #66
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I love it :)
Its amazing sweetie

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Old 21-05-2008, 12:30 AM   #67
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Old 21-05-2008, 01:08 AM   #68
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Old 21-05-2008, 03:06 AM   #69
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Mer,
You really have talent my dear! I look forward to reading more!! (((hugs)))



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Old 25-05-2008, 03:28 AM   #70
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"Ugh," Mer growled, crossing her arms. "I swear you guys are children in adult bodies." Arhen let go of me and swam to her.

"Yeah," Arhen questioned, his face getting dangerously close to hers, "and your point is?" He got to where their noses were touching.

"Oh, ****," Dan said, taking notice to the growing animosity between Mer and Arhen. "What are the consequences of what he just did?"

"I don't even want to think about it!" I laughed, giving out a dry chuckle. I gazed back at them, and the worst feeling came when I saw her arm go above her head.

"Uh-oh," Dan gasped, "looks like he's gonna get it!"

"Whatever," Mer sighed, falling into a backstroke, moving away from the rest of us.

"Did that just happen?" Sara chimed in, swimming next to Dan. "Since when is Mer the merciful type?"

"Eh, she is probably thinking about something," Arhen explained. "She always tones down the violence when there is something on her mind."

"Nothing good ever comes from her contemplations," Dan shrugged, wrapping his hands around Sara's waist, watching Mer swim back and forth. "I wish I knew what went on in that head of hers.

"She doesn't even like knowing what goes on in that little head of hers," Arhen sighed. "Emotional abuse, maniac depression, bulimia, rape, suicide...believe me, that girl has a lot to think about."

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I finally have time to write!!! I wrote more in one hour than I did in the entire month. I am officially done with school and now have time on my hands to write. :) Thank you so much for being patient with me.

For those who have given me info. I am in the process of making a layout of the side story you will all be introducted in. That way, I can dedicate the whole story to those that have been so kind as to help me out. Once that side story comes out. (I am aiming for July...I have some affairs to set in order...sorry) Your characters will be in the main story. I have high expectations for this story, and I think, and hope, you will enjoy it.

Well, sorry about all the rambling. Thank you again for taking interest in my story, it means a lot.

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I think I might be addicted to Domo-kun.
"Let's go to Tokyo!"
Me:"Tokyo? But what about Japan?"
"Mer, you idiot...Tokyo is in Japan."
Me:"Really? Since when? OH...damn it..."
"How the hell do you have an IQ over 170?"
Me:"Oh, shut it!"

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Old 28-05-2008, 04:05 PM   #71
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Old 29-05-2008, 12:42 AM   #72
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Old 29-05-2008, 01:11 AM   #73
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Just started reading this story, its really good.
Looking forward to reading more.

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Old 29-05-2008, 02:11 AM   #74
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I'm completely enthralled by your story. I can't wait to read more of it!! Keep up the awesome work!





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Old 01-06-2008, 11:02 PM   #75
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Old 05-06-2008, 01:35 PM   #76
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Old 07-06-2008, 10:46 PM   #77
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Old 08-06-2008, 10:02 PM   #78
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I just finished reading....It's absolutely great. Keep up the good work!
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Old 11-06-2008, 08:21 PM   #79
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