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Old 10-10-2009, 08:22 PM   #1
IntrovertedKindaSoul
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My recovery poem.

Hey Guys,

I wrote this poem (not sure if its any good) but i wrote it in a sort of response to another poem i wrote when i was quite ill and so i just wanted to do something more positive :) I know its only short but i might add more too it later. I also like Rhymes, ha ha :p
I welcome all feedback!
Love Sarah x


The Future

It’s been a while since you have seen me that way,
When I used to restrict and slowly decay.

But, just because you cant see my pain doesn’t mean it never existed,
I have just fought hard and resisted.

It’s not worth going back for and everyone can see,
There is now a future ahead of me.

What path I take is in my hands,
Instead of crying in hospitals, it is far away I stand.

All the pain I felt before is still inside,
But its better to feel alive.

Feeling numb is no cure for loneliness,
And contentment with my life is nothing but a quest.

With the people I have and music in my soul,
I know ill make it through till I grow old.

One day I hope that when I look back,
I will have done all of things that I wanted and make you proud at last.


Last edited by IntrovertedKindaSoul : 11-10-2009 at 03:09 PM.


' With hindsight I was more than blind, lost without a clue
Thought I was getting carat gold and what I got was you
Stuck inside the circumstances lonely at the top
I've always been an introvert happily bleeding. '



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Old 11-10-2009, 09:35 PM   #2
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I really like it and it's great that you're recovering and able to write something positive/ Well done.

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Old 11-10-2009, 09:55 PM   #3
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I really like this !
Well done :)

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Old 12-10-2009, 07:20 PM   #4
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Thank you both :) i was beginning to think it was really really rubbish not getting any feedback! I feel better now ;) x x



' With hindsight I was more than blind, lost without a clue
Thought I was getting carat gold and what I got was you
Stuck inside the circumstances lonely at the top
I've always been an introvert happily bleeding. '



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Old 15-10-2009, 10:27 PM   #5
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Well done sweetie.
That was really nice and well written :D
Hope your okay xx

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Old 16-10-2009, 01:58 AM   #6
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well done xx i love it



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Old 16-10-2009, 06:02 AM   #7
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goodjob for writing something positive! I never can and trust me, I try.

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Old 17-10-2009, 06:59 AM   #8
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Oh, that was really good. I loved it. = ]



oh non-believer, please believe me.
is there honestly nothing in this world
that keeps you living & breathing?
you're a ghost in your own
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Old 17-10-2009, 07:04 AM   #9
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I love it, really good to read something positive



"Recovery is something that you have to work
on every single day and it's
something that doesn't
get a day off."


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