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Old 14-06-2007, 06:04 AM   #2
xxybermancer
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The ending does make sense; a poem can tell a story, go on tangents, and still reflect you.

"For her to show the world
Has burned, the edged curled."

I love those lines the most.

This is pretty well written. The only advice I stress to people is don't put yourself in the corner. You've seen how I like to 'free write' instead of endless ryhmes and lines.

Oh, and I hope you're distracted enough. =)

lxxy

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