The title of the book I'm writing lends itself more obviously because it's a faux-naive thing written about a young girl, so the name is intentionally childlike in 'Susie's Doll'. With something like yours, I'd be tempted to write more of it, maybe give it a working title if it helps you but be prepared to change it, then find a line or a couple of words from the prose itself that symbolises something about the narrative or the characters. An example of this would be 'Love, Actually' but that suffers because it's rubbish and doesn't mean anything. 'Prozac Nation' by Elizabeth Wurzel would be a better one.
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