Originally Posted by
PaperClip
Criticism - not from me!!
This is really good, cant wait to read some more - there is going to be more isn't there???
I love the way that it doesn't give too much away, i can pick out lil point of her personality already - a great start!
Cant wait for the next installment!
PaperClip!
PM anytime!
Thanks for being so nice. I wasn't sure, there was something about it that was just not right.
I do want to add some more, but am not sure where it should lead, I think I will though.
Thanksies for being so complimentary