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Buttons. · 14-07-2013, 09:22 AM

I actually thought this was well written, makes good use of literary devices and really gets the emotion across :) The only thing I didn't like was the use of the shall always love thee at the end, the rest of the text was quite unique and unpretentious whereas that line felt a bit forced to me.

14-07-2013, 09:22 AM	#2
Buttons. Never knowing...a helping hand or hell to pay? Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: UK I am currently:	I actually thought this was well written, makes good use of literary devices and really gets the emotion across :) The only thing I didn't like was the use of the shall always love thee at the end, the rest of the text was quite unique and unpretentious whereas that line felt a bit forced to me.
	'Never forget what you are. The rest of the world will not. Wear it like armor, and it can never be used to hurt you.' ['There is only one thing we say to death. Not today'.'] 'We are each our own devil, and we make this world our hell.’ – Oscar Wilde ‘It’s hard to dance with the devil on your back.’ Sydney Carter