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MaybeNotForever · 08-11-2012, 08:33 PM

I really like this - the plain black lines with only red here and there is really rather striking. :)

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But the art fits really well with the song, especially with how it's timed to fade in and out like you've done.

I hope you feel better soon. :)

Fi x

08-11-2012, 08:33 PM	#3
MaybeNotForever Fi~ Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Reading, UK. I am currently:	I really like this - the plain black lines with only red here and there is really rather striking. :) The following content has been hidden - Reason : Critique As you said crits are ok, one thing I noticed is your rear leg anatomy. Redline: https://www.dropbox.com/s/9glkxckpmu...anatomyryl.png (My drawing isn't very good, refer to the generic dog photo :P) The bones A and B are pretty similar in length, and C is shorter. Oh, and there's no dew/thumb on the rear legs, only the forelegs. Sorry to be nit-picking! It's a very small error. But the art fits really well with the song, especially with how it's timed to fade in and out like you've done. I hope you feel better soon. :) Fi x
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