i like this so far, its a really good intro and at this time i think it would be great to start introducing the story line a bit or maybe the reason as to why she moved/went to a new school. maybe a little bit of her history or her story of her life could do to. to be honest i really did enjoy it. hope there is more soon =) x
Last edited by delianaa : 29-02-2012 at 07:21 PM.
Reason: made a typo
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