No don't start again! What I have read so far it's amazing! Fair enough she has given her thoughts on it and fair enough you have taken it to heart. I know I would have too if it was said about mine. *cuddles you*
I say carry on with it and PROVE HER WRONG! I'm going to read it tomorrow for you hun and let you know what I think.
I really like your story, it's original it has great characters and you can imagine everything you say, which is exactly how you want it to be. =)
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