Thread: My World
View Single Post
Old 02-12-2009, 09:02 AM   #8
evfreak42
 
evfreak42's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Pennsylvania

Just wrote this. Unable to sleep. Inspiration hits at the most inconvenient times! I'd really like some feedback, pleaasseee!

Disintegrate
The last shadow leaves late
From the room that begs my slumber

I'll beckon unwanted company close;
Tonight's sleep will be tough trying

Even as lids drip, and drop, and drain me,
I shall not succumb to the vast, lazy sea

Stagnant in wait of its chance
When shreds of shining safety falter

And no longer will shadows shift;
Only disintegrate

Only disintegrate
Only disintegrate



Just what am I supposed to say?
And tell you why I turned out this way?
Don't make me. Don't make me.

-The Used


evfreak42 is offline   Reply With Quote