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nobody.but.me.

26-03-2009 04:54 AM

2 more poems.. hope you all like.

HOPE
by me

Passing time
things she no longer enjoys
a broken soul
a lost child
trying to make things okay
hope
like a dimly lit candle
the one thing that keeps
her going
the hope of a better day tomorrow
only to be let down
time and time again

HEART
by me

Like the map
on the hotel room door
but without the
emergency escape route
cause in reality
the only emergency escape route
is pulling something
very
very
stupid.

Tweetyluver07

26-03-2009 02:34 PM

I like them. It's very good to get these thoughts and feelings out of your head and get them on to a sheet of paper. You're brilliant.. <3. If you need somebody, I'm here :)

nobody.but.me.

29-03-2009 05:33 AM

thanks that means a lot

slowly fading

29-03-2009 04:35 PM

that was totally beauiful
i loved them

nobody.but.me.

30-03-2009 12:39 AM

thanks! i will put more up tonight.

Tweetyluver07

30-03-2009 02:00 PM

<---------- Sits and waits patiently for more... =)

nobody.but.me.

31-03-2009 02:37 AM

typing as we speak :)

Tweetyluver07

27-04-2009 01:41 PM

where did they go?

Tweetyluver07

27-04-2009 01:43 PM

:crazy:

nobody.but.me.

10-05-2009 01:05 AM

they are up!

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