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nobody.but.me. 26-03-2009 04:49 AM

Poem I wrote.
 
MASK
by me

She sits and listens
jsut like she's supposed to
Or pretends, at least
she hasn't actually listened
in a long time
It's all she's ever known
No one to understand
the pain
the lies
all the tears she has cried
covered up by a mask
"the girl that has it all"
they don't know what it's like
with this pain inside
eating you alive
inside out.

Lady Arya 26-03-2009 02:11 PM

i really understand that

extreme turbulance 26-03-2009 06:02 PM

That is superbly written, it actually sent a shiver down my spine. thanks for sharing!

Tweetyluver07 27-03-2009 01:30 PM

you're such a wonderful writer... I love this one as well. again, it relates to me personally.

x__elegantlywasted 29-03-2009 03:29 AM

this one really hits home.

nobody.but.me. 29-03-2009 05:31 AM

thanks guys. i have more i will post.


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