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TinkerDebs 24-03-2009 10:26 PM

a positive poem =]
 
i was bored one ict lesson - so seeing that i can never find words to tell my cousellor how grwateful i am - i wrote her this:
hope you like?

in this darkened night
you’re a shining light
of a new hope
that doesn’t need a rope
you are the sun in sky
that doesn’t want us to die
the stars in the black
helping to heal the crack
cursed at; swore at
and definitely ranted at
you’re a brave soul
to even enter that black hole
in case you’ve not already been told
clearly you’ve got a heart of gold
you are obviously kind and caring
but your not too overbearing
i know I’m not that warmest towards you
but I appreciate all you do
you’ve helped more than you should
and more than I thought you could
i’ve told you the worst of it
you know most of my s**t
but you’ve never run away
in search of a better day
i never thought I could trust you
but actually I do
you’ve latest the longest
so by default you must be the strongest
you were never what I thought you would be
because I was always convinced you’d be mean to me
but I was severely wrong
and I thought that for too long
your one of the nicest people I know
you’ve even seen my lowest low
yet somehow your still standing
stopping me from crash landing
it has to be said
i thought by now I’d be dead
but you helped me avoid it
and so now bit by bit
i can rebuild this life
and ditch the need for using a knife
i guess this is a thank you
also an attempt to be nice to you
because i know your not a monster
and your not the devil
so I’m no longer scared of you

Tweetyluver07 27-03-2009 02:07 PM

pure brillance. and if i may say very well written. Your counselor will love it :)


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