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"I promise"
"You won't hurt,"
Promised the girl, To the knife, As it left a bloody pearl, She didn't understand, How blood-shed, Hurt less, Than having him dead, Rivers of red, Of pain, Unless someone notices, She's perfectly sane, Each day, She promises her knife, "You won't hurt me, Until I take my life." She plans, Even plots, Too many choices, Pick a straw or lots? Oh her day, Of reckoning, Her knife whispers, Beckoning, "I won't hurt you." It calls, And for her own lies, She falls, "I won't take a moment" The knife says, She belives it, Tries not to make a mess, She holds her knife, Holds it tight, Closes her eyes, Shuts out the light, "You'll be with him soon, I promise" The knife cuts, A last 'kiss' The girl dies, Bliss. Bliss hurts. |
its absolutely great.. i just.. you're just an astounding writer.. i love all of your writings... ***hugs*** if you need somebody , i'm here. :)
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wow that was really amazing. beautiful and haunting. i loved it
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