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Starlightembers

22-08-2008 10:36 PM

What do You see?

What Do You See?
I don't know what to really say about this one - it just sort of came to me. I was having one of those
"I just need to write" moments, and this is what my fingers came up with.

Look at me,
and tell me what you see.
Do you see the pain?
The suffering?
The never ending agony?

No?
Well, what do you see?
The next victim to strike at?
Your kill of the next night?
Or just another soul to dispose of?

Tig	22-08-2008 11:46 PM

I like it. It works well as a short poem, I found it snappy and quick which I thought was good.
I'll look out for more of your poems :)

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