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Star_Girl 10-04-2008 06:39 PM

Razor Blade
 
"Why do you always cry so hard?"
I heard my Razor Blade say,
"Come; hold me in your hands
And I'll take your pain away."

Things feel so hopeless Razor Blade
And I don't have a single friend,
My heart has broken so many times
I don't think I can mend.

"Then I will be a friend for you
Just run me over your skin,
I promise I'll always be around
to release the troubles within."

"Watch the hurt leave your body
Inside each drop of blood,
I'll save you from the darkness
Whenever it begins to flood."

You've done so much for me Razor Blade
But people are starting to see,
Their words speak strongly against you
And they're really upsetting me...

"Honey, you don't need them
They just don't understand,
Dig with me a little deeper
And I'll take you to heaven by the hand."

zebragirl 11-04-2008 04:13 PM

Wow this is really good written. So well spoken, and it explain so much. Keep up the good writing.

*phantom* 11-04-2008 04:33 PM

cripes!
powerful =D
x

Shatterproof 11-04-2008 04:33 PM

I'm in total awe! Beautifully written.

broken 11-04-2008 04:47 PM

this is wondersful hun ^-^

Sophie.x 13-04-2008 12:16 PM

thats really good, very creative
i hope everythings okay
much love
x

Queer Fringe 13-04-2008 02:54 PM

Wow! gave me goosebumps that's powerful!
I love your style!
It's like, showing how seductive and addictive self-harm is for people...excellent!
=D xx

moonlight 13-04-2008 02:57 PM

i love it! its so imaginitive
<3


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