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Into The River Styx
Inebriated skeleton, your little
paw prints surround the dock. Do not be so facile, the growl of night is biting at my ankle. I do not care if the water is wet. See, I am terrified of those slippery dragons swirling amongst the reeds, breathing their soft seaweed flames and I still touch the surface. My arms are not the familiar Caucasian skin you desired. Oozing green slime, my griffon blood taints my skin jaundice yellow, oh so like nicotine But not that drug, I cannot feel it under my nails. I wonder if you do. There are so many things you will not say to me. How dull, be brilliant like the fizzing Supernovas you let me see through your sapphire telescope. The stars collapsed and captured my delicate rasp. Digress no more, you pallid coward. How could you say that I am no better than they? My dear, my heart is not made of wood nor my eyes of quartz. I am a naked flame in the dark hillside. I have spilled innocent blood all in good cause. Red flashes in the night mean naught. My own sanguine system is not as viscous. It is thick mud Like the mud you are slipping in. Step into the water, the current is fine and weak. Simple steps, dear, insanity is just around the corner once you are immune to those pesky emotional hormones in your old body. My fertile belly died so long ago, join it. Let the stomach acid freeze and grant yourself immortality. If, you are brave enough. |
I do not care if the water is wet.
Wow your a good writer i like the above line not sure why but i liked it all but this quote has stuck with me Well done:hop: |
"blood taints my skin jaundice yellow, oh so like nicotine" Lovely. =D "Supernovas you let me see through your sapphire telescope. The stars collapsed and captured my delicate rasp." This whole this is great. |
i felt this needed to be read outloud, and how right i was.
the second stanza is just all hissing noises and SO perfectly mirrors the 'slippery dragons' and i love love love love the descriptions. absolutely beautiful imagery. thanks, and i'd love to see more of your stuff. xemily |
I don't have words to describe how beautiful I thought that piece of poetry was.
It was just simpley amazing. |
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