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sillystring 16-03-2008 12:17 AM

poem (could trig? idk)
 
Mia, Mia on the wall
Why must we
Be the ones to take the fall?

You're the one with the problem
Don't you see
Why must you take your anger
Out on someone like me?

You call me names
And tell me lies
You harass and abuse me
Until you see me cry

Ana, Ana can’t you see
How much you hurt
And damage me?

You stare through the mirror
And call me fat
For you, I’ll never be good enough
And that's a fact

Every bite I try
Now brings another tear
For now your voice
Is the only one that I can hear

Mia, Mia on the wall
Why must we take the fall?
Ana, Ana can’t you see
What your grasp has done to me?

You’ve screwed us over
Made us cry
Drew us in deeper
With all your lies

There is no such perfection
And no such thing as victory
Only the illusion of control
The only prize is promised misery

Ana, Mia set me free
Please let me go,
And leave me be.

surprising mystery 16-03-2008 12:23 AM

I think its really good, but I recon it should be in the creative corner.
How are you?
xx

troubled_sorrowz 16-03-2008 12:55 AM

^^Cant add to what Marie said really. Very Good =]
xox


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