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MyApocalypse

21-02-2008 03:18 AM

It's Colder On Your Own by: me... D:

"I want to see the stars,
they shine so bright and pale."
I imagine them so wonderful,
seen under a thin veil.
The veil of the universe,
a question in itself.
"Why must stars live to die?"
"You left them on the shelf"
I asked of spotted unicorns,
that lived another realm.
He spoke of tricks and make believe
that parents tried to tell'm.
I asked him "Why do people die?"
His agony had shown.
He turned to me and simply said,
"It's colder on your own".

Mystified

21-02-2008 05:13 AM

Wow. That's awesome. I love the ending, especially. It makes so much sense...but it's just so damn sad. Great write, and keep writing!

MyApocalypse

21-02-2008 06:20 AM

Thank-you so much for the positive feedback! Sometimes I doubt the worth of my writing, but obviously everyone does. So again, thanks! (:

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