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Kittyne 18-02-2008 01:20 AM

Poem - black hole
 
My Mind is a Black Hole
It pulls everything in and never lets it escape
Memories come flooding back
Words and pictures flashing and bright
I'm falling, falling
Falling into the black hole of my mind
Words come back to haunt me.
i slash and slash at them with my sword
a sword that is accutally a razor blade
and with ever slash i tear at my skin
over and over and over
until i fight no more
the black hole has won
it sucked me in

there is no escape

i wrote this one night to distract myself. its rubbish but thought other might want to see.

Casca 18-02-2008 01:30 AM

Oh, hun! I'm so sorry you're feeling like that. I enjoyed your poem and I am looking forward to your next one. :)

_Mer

Kittyne 18-02-2008 01:40 AM

thank you. i know its pretty rubbish and my spelling is atrocious


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