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AndBreathe 16-11-2007 06:39 PM

Little Love Delicately (comments please)
 
Little love delicately
Dont leave me
I need you.
I need you to close my eyes
I dont want to see.



Little love
You've killed me
But i cant love you enough
Because you made me not see.



Little love delicately
Make me small
Make me beautiful
Make me thin
You and me, we can win


Little love delicately
Im scared
Help me through
I want to be invisable
& be brand new


Little love delicately
I dont want you
I need you
You will look back darling
& see i flew.


& if i stop breathing
Keep holding me..
Dont let go
I can still feel.


Dead.

AndBreathe 17-11-2007 07:33 PM

Comments please?

AndBreathe 18-11-2007 09:52 PM

Yeah I do
Its not really that good
Not of it good
But its a try :)

xxxx

burnxthexpast 19-11-2007 01:29 PM

I like it...
xx

Shadowedcorner 20-11-2007 04:57 AM

I think its good too.


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