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errorartist 30-07-2013 05:18 PM

broken and battered,but did it even matter?
 
you pulled me away from the edge.
with all your might
you took me away from the ledge
and gave me a reason to fight.


you showed me
that i was strong.
you set me free
but of course, i thought wrong.

it was such a story to tell
when straight through my heart
how you made me fall,
you shoved the deadly dart


you left me
broken and battered
i wasnt free
but to you does it even matter?


i picked up the blade.
ready to swipe.
wash away my tears
with each deadly swipe.

my funeral came
you were seen
no one was to tame
your soul which became me


i was broken and battered
but to you...
did it even matter?

HeartsCry 01-08-2013 01:49 AM

I think this is amazing and beautiful even if the feeling behind the words is kinda sad :)


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