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First time poet, who didn't know it.
So I posted this in my member journal but now I feel like I want other people to read it. I wrote this when I was in a bad place. In a way it might really help you verbalise your depression and know that you aren't alone.
Depression is a house, where the chairs have forgotten how to hold you. Where the mirrors, have forgotten how to reflect you. Where the walls, have forgotten how to contain you. Depression is a house, where no-one can protect you. Where the doors no longer, let you in or out. Just trapped, buried you deep into the ground. Depression is a house, that can disappear, or reappear at the slightest gust of wind. The foundations crumble, shatter, fall, crash and burn. Depression is a house, a run down, messed up house that's invisible to everyone. A lonely old house, with a ghost of who you used to be, wandering. Lost. Depression is a house, that you are forced to own. A burden of a house, that you can't afford to keep anymore. Draining you of everything. Until you're worn out, given up. Depression is a house, that's in the middle of a storm, in your brain with your thoughts thinking, living, breathing, seeing, remember. Can't take it. Depression is my house. |
Wow, this is amazing and you've really captured what it feels like. You should definitely keep writing!
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You write very well. I hope you keep at it. This poem is very real, I like it a lot.
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You're really talented, I found this poem extremely emotive. Keep it up!
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