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A Quiet Riot (Poem)

A quiet riot in my head
A tragedy for a brain
Something has got to be wrong up there
Because I can feel myself slowly going insane

Numb all the time
But hurt all the same
Anger, hatred, pain
Again and again and again I pay

Why?
Whatever have I done?
To make these enemies trample me,
One by one?

Broken forever?
God, I hope not
If anyone is even looking out for me anymore
I'll surely be impressed
Because they must be hidden pretty good,
For I can't find them
Like I'm under house arrest

Lost in my own brain am I?
Why wont you ever try to help?
Is there nothing worth saving
No one left in here to help?

Help.
Please,
I don't even know whats wrong
You all ignore me as I scream
Just see a happy quiet face
Hidden underneath
I'm full of disgrace

Longing, for closure?
Maybe
But its not worth it.
Nothing is worth it
Life is barely even worth it

Everything good is gone
It will never return to me
For I am always going to be broken
Lost in my own head,
For eternity.

your poem is deep. It is really well written, you have some amazing lines in there. I hope you get the help you need remember you always have friends on here. you can message me or any one you would like if you ever want to talk. I promise you wont stay broken forever... stay strong

this is lovely,, you captured how i feel...your great poet

I absolutely loved that hun...

I especially liked the bit about being lost in your own brain. I can empathise with that. Really good poem xXx

your an amazingly talented writer... you captured my feelings so well! I hpoe you get the help you need and obviously want <3