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dollpart 14-01-2011 05:06 PM

Daily Haiku Experiment
 
So... To try and break out of writer's block and boredom, I'm writing a haiku a day, just to get words out there. Doesn't matte if they're good/ bad/ sad/ happy/ entirely accurate... it's just practice. Anyone want to join me in this thread?
The basic haiku formation is 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables... look them up & experiment!

Bex

dollpart 14-01-2011 05:09 PM

today's

Court

it's 'commendable',
he says, that i'm 'on the rails'-
except that one time.

coffee; quick breather.
pulling myself together,
under the blue light.

words on the page- black
and white like concrete thought:
un-stable. difficult.


(These three are about this morning, when I was indeed in court for something stupid I did while ill and plastered).

mikey 14-01-2011 06:43 PM

I might write a few at some point :-)
Nice idea for a thread.

silentdancer 14-01-2011 10:02 PM

mind if i join you?

it's funny, how things
change.though they seem the same.
let the change come in.

dollpart 14-01-2011 10:24 PM

^ i really like that!

silentdancer 14-01-2011 10:31 PM

lol thanks, i shall write another to complete my hijackion of you thread (sounds naughty lol)

words trailing after
my pen. proof that i exist
can you see me now?

inspired by your one about words lol

dollpart 14-01-2011 10:56 PM

yesterday's haiku: oxfam book shop

time has gone quickly-
sorting through books until my
fingers are dusty

mikey 15-01-2011 11:16 AM

Nobody knows it.
Today is the day that I
shall roll out the sea

silentdancer 15-01-2011 12:23 PM

my ass is stuck
while it sweats profusely to
the chair im on

dollpart 16-01-2011 12:56 AM

silentdancer- lol!
mikey- really like that.

...must admit it is 4 to midnight and i'm still stuck.

dollpart 16-01-2011 12:52 PM

Sunday


spurs- man united.
despite the likely defeat,
i've a glow of hope.

silentdancer 16-01-2011 09:29 PM

getting up now
though my eyes are still heavy
really need a smoke

Asura 16-01-2011 09:34 PM

Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator

yadda yadda

dollpart 16-01-2011 09:40 PM

^ like.

Conversations at the Pub

Joe says that I could
dance between rain drops. What a
beautiful idea.

mikey 16-01-2011 09:43 PM

Haha!
Love the last two.

Zanniie 16-01-2011 09:44 PM

Oooo Oooo I wanna go *ponders*

Sitting. Staring; tears,
fall from this porcelain doll
trailing down the cracks.

Watching from afar,
sight fails the oblivious
until it's too late.

Okay okay, I'm done being a thread hogger *glomps*
Loving the ideas here :)

dollpart 16-01-2011 09:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zanniie (Post 2660395)
Oooo Oooo I wanna go *ponders*

Sitting. Staring; tears,
fall from this porcelain doll
trailing down the cracks.

Watching from afar,
sight fails the oblivious
until it's too late.

love this

dollpart 19-01-2011 09:42 AM

becky dreams about rats
that fly. wakes in a panic.
goes to make coffee.

x-wolfspirit-x 20-01-2011 12:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alithaven (Post 2660371)
Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator

EPIC!! :D

x-wolfspirit-x 20-01-2011 12:16 AM

is is my first one ever so dont be mean.

love can be a friend,
but sometimes this isn't so,
love can tear you down.


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