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Confusing but intreging - Poem PLEASE COMMENT
Field of Mountains So vast and immense, My Mountains surround my consciousness. I dare you to look into these eyes you fear, Stare down demons, angels and merciful beings. The pit that never-ends were uncovered and in its deepness, you saw relics of the past; such beauty in the fallen ones. However, the eyes you fear are mine. And never did you realise that having no soul, I replaced the colour to represent a mirror, That would finally force you to acknowledge everything that lies alive in your eyes. When I shattered inside, Seven years of bad luck strived against me. And in my eyes you could see the stone blooming onto a field until you saw Mountain peaks and hollow valleys, emerging from my once-empty glare. |
I like this one too. =) Your poetry is great.
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