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DestroyMe 02-01-2010 10:45 PM

The Monster(poems)
 
look in the mirror
the figure staring back at you,
is it you,
or is it me?
the voice inside your head
paint a pretty picture
with scars that once bled
colour paints the picture red

look away
I am still there
the thing that you most fear
un wanted tears stream down your face
shaking in agony you feel disgraced

your body frail
your mind distorted
I am here
I am with you
I never leave
I am you...
you're thoughts, your fears, your dreams
you try to cut me out but I stay
rooted to your soul
laughing at your pain I put on display

you cannot run from me
I am truth
I am lies
I am the pain hiding in your eyes
I am....
Anorexia


I don't like it but I have a few I'm proud of that I might post

Fry 03-01-2010 12:24 AM

I like it. Very powerful.
It's 'your' instead of 'you're' by the way. :)


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