Me and Angela (sweet_as_pie) Wrote a Poem :)
 

We did 2 lines at a time, on MSN

"Look at her standing in the croud.
She wants to scream, but the music's so loud.
She screams silently, in her head.
Wishing to curl up, in her bed.

But night after night, she feels his touch.
The one thing, she longs for so much.
"shutting her eyes, locking herself away.
She cuts her wrist, just like another day.

She hides her tears, no one can know.
The fear, the pain, make her feel so low.
The secrets, the lies, it's all coming out.
That girl in the crowd, needing to shout."


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That's really good! And to say you made it on MSN! lol that part made me giggle actually.

thats a really good poem =]

That's really impressive, well done both of you =)

I like it :)

great poem and great that you wrote it together on msn - how cool is that?

It's very cool. It is going to be in my story, When Tears Are Red. Thanks, Beth, you rock!

awesome, good job both of you :)

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Thanks :)

I like it :)