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Old 04-12-2015, 04:27 PM   #1
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Adult - Child Sexual Abuse

Careless and free
Cheerful and sweet
Clinging to
Calloused hands
Clouded and secluded plans

Special
Sensual
Six year old girl
Seductively
Spreads her
Spindly legs

Anticipation
Abhorant violation
Adult sensation
Awashed with shame
Alone and in pain



Soon... Now will be then...Today will be yesterday... Present will be past...And thought will be memory... So...Live for the future! Make your future how you want it!

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Old 07-12-2015, 10:56 AM   #2
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That was really well written. A hard subject matter so difficult to read in its vividness, but that is the sign of a well written piece in these cases.

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Old 24-10-2016, 01:07 AM   #3
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wow sooty! i really love this poem

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Old 24-10-2016, 10:15 PM   #4
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Sooty...what can I say. I am SOOoooOOooo impressed!

Rarely do you see a serious accrostic and rarely do you see one that has an abnormal structure and finally...

RARELY do you see one that is so well written. I love it.

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Old 25-10-2016, 08:46 AM   #5
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Thank you guys. I'm surprised this has resurfaced from ages ago! Thanks Rug for the compliments on the poem. I don't write often and this was one of my more ordered poems.

Sophie.x



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