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Old 04-06-2007, 12:44 AM   #1
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Possibly Triggering - 'I'm FREE' (poem)2 years, 2 months and 15 days :D

I'm

FREE

free from pain,
free from shame,
free from the blade,
that halds no gain.

i have back my life,
i've beaten all that strife,
i'm free to live again,
without the vicious chain.

my life is my own,
new seeds of hope are sewn,
my life i can choose at will,
to live in happiness until i've had my fill.

the seeds have changed,
from tiny glimmers, to young dreams are ranged,
from squashable desires,
to the now raging, passionate fires.

i found my soul,
killed the one that stole,
i live my life to the full,
never a rock bottom day, never a moment too dull.

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Old 04-06-2007, 02:42 AM   #2
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That is so awesome (both your accomplishment and your poem.) You should be so proud of yourself. I wish you much luck, and continued success.

P.S. It's cool that you wrote such a powerful poem AND were able to make it rhyme (I can't)



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Old 04-06-2007, 07:06 AM   #3
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Wow thsi was such an amazing poem.

I am currently a little over 8 months free and it is nice to see a reminder of why I stopped.

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Old 04-06-2007, 01:15 PM   #4
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Well done. Nicely written
*hands you a crisp*



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Old 04-06-2007, 04:27 PM   #5
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i have to make my poems rhyme, i can't stand to know they don't rhyme lol! I'm quite musical in the sense that when i write poetry i write them so they could be lyrics? i prefer lyric style poetry to others, because i think they flow so much better.

this one, however....didn't have the usual lyric-like feel to it, for that you need to have the same amount of syllables per line etc.

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Old 06-06-2007, 06:29 AM   #6
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I like it.

Congrats. :)



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Old 07-06-2007, 02:15 AM   #7
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i have other poetry that i wrote during my selfharm and recovery, it is triggering, a lot of it depicts sh in graphic detail, but if anyone wants a link, i'll either link it or put it in my journal. mand x



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