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Old 23-06-2017, 10:51 PM   #1
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just another cryptic poem

the twinkling
light
on the metal
does fold

as it sinks
through a night
made of words
black in BOLD

i pause
and despite
of a truth
I've been told

long ago
i just might
in my youth
scratched and old

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Old 27-07-2017, 10:30 AM   #2
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It is indeed cryptic! Well done, I think it's a good poem :)



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