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Old 12-09-2009, 11:59 PM   #1
am_i_that_different
 
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"The cure" - new poem

The cure
New years eve,
1999.
The world goes to bed
with celebrations ringing in their ears.
Not for what is past, for those crazy, messy years.
But for a dream.

of men in silver suits, shining in the sun
with robotic dogs and flying cars.
A hundred happy years all rolled into one
A pill for every malady;
hunger, so there is no famine,
greed, so the world is fair,
chaos, to undo the past.
‘21st Century’ it will say on the bottle.
The cure. We wake

with a BANG!
A bomb to shatter the illusion,
The only cure to our delusion.


The moment my dad read this, he said "Aren't those last two lines a bit pro-terrorism?" I never thought of it like that!

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Old 13-09-2009, 12:39 AM   #2
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That's really good... I like it :)





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