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Old 20-02-2008, 11:35 AM   #21
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your a very good writer. i really like this xx





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Old 20-02-2008, 02:54 PM   #22
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This is excellent



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Old 22-02-2008, 01:44 AM   #23
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I am in the process of writing more, but I just haven't had the time to do it. I will post more as soon as I can. Sorry about that.

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"Let's go to Tokyo!"
Me:"Tokyo? But what about Japan?"
"Mer, you idiot...Tokyo is in Japan."
Me:"Really? Since when? OH...damn it..."
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Old 23-02-2008, 11:18 AM   #24
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Thats ok no need to apologise
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Old 26-02-2008, 12:35 AM   #25
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"That ****er better be home!" Arhen grumbled as we walked onto the street where Seb lives.

"You know he's home, he is always with his girlfriend and they are totally in love," I smiled.

"Yes, I-can-HEAR-how-in-love-they-are!" He cackled, staggering his words. Once I finally got where he was coming at, I punched him in the arm.

"That's not nice!" I whined.

"But it's true," he remarked. Thinking about it, I laughed, shrugging in agreement. "Ahh, we're here!" We stopped in front of a medium brick house. "Let's go in." He lead me to the front porch. He bent down and picked up the key that was underneath the welcome mat. He used it to open the door, of course, without knocking first. Eh, he practically lived there anyway, so it really made no difference.

He took me into the house.

"Hello," he called out, "anyone here?" There was no answer.

"Hmm," I said, "I guess no one's home.

"Hello!" Arhen yelled again.

"Arhen," I snapped, "there is no use yelling if there isn't anybody..." I screamed. Someone had attacked my sides. "What the hell?" I turned around and saw someone looking back at me.

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I know it's not much, but it is the start of the second chapter I guess you could say. Thank you for reading my story for as long as you have. I greatly appreciate. Comments and criticism are welcomed as always. I love to hear your opinions.

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I think I might be addicted to Domo-kun.
"Let's go to Tokyo!"
Me:"Tokyo? But what about Japan?"
"Mer, you idiot...Tokyo is in Japan."
Me:"Really? Since when? OH...damn it..."
"How the hell do you have an IQ over 170?"
Me:"Oh, shut it!"

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Old 26-02-2008, 01:33 PM   #26
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nice cliffhanger.
hurry and write more, this addict needs his fix.



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Old 26-02-2008, 01:38 PM   #27
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Oooh this is good hun



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Old 01-03-2008, 03:42 AM   #28
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Arhen let of me and grabbed him.

"Dan!" He yelled, "What the hell did you do that for?" Dan slunk out of his hold.

"Aww, come on," Dan whined, "can't you take a joke?"

"You scared the hell out of me," I wimpered. "You almost gave me a heart attack!"

"Sowwy, Cecilia, please forgive me."

"Fine," I scoffed, "I forgive you."

"Yay!" Dan screeched.

"You really need to work on that screeching of yours," Arhen warned. "You know that gets on her nerves."

"Tell me about it," Dan exclaimed. "I really hope she didn't hear me...!" Dan buckled over, holding his head. "Owwwwwwwwwwww!"

"You need to work on not yelling all the ****ing time," his assailant moaned.

"Well, SORRY, Miss Tits," he smirked. This really struck a chord with her. She jumoed on Dan's back, compromising him to the ground. She placed herself on his back. "Mere-chan, I was only kidding."

"Hmm," Mer shrugged, "too badd, I'm not getting off of you till Sara gets back." She crossed her fishnet clad legs on the ground.

'Meredith, still as merciless as ever I see," Arhen laughed.

She let out a chuckle,"and you're next if you pull anything."

Arhen cringed in fear.

"Don't worry, Mer." I laughed, "I'll keep him in line."

"I know you will, C.C." Mer smiled, "Now get over here! I haven't seen you in ages!"

I let go of Arhen's hand and hugged her. She got off of Dan, shooting a streak of fear into him.

"Oh, come on, Dan. I beat on you because I 'luf' you." Mer exclaimed, 'I'll let you off easy this time."

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I am so glad that I finally have some time to write some more. I know you've been waiting, but I hope this will make up for that. Thank you for reading as far as you have. Comments and criticism are always welcome.

Well, until next time.

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I think I might be addicted to Domo-kun.
"Let's go to Tokyo!"
Me:"Tokyo? But what about Japan?"
"Mer, you idiot...Tokyo is in Japan."
Me:"Really? Since when? OH...damn it..."
"How the hell do you have an IQ over 170?"
Me:"Oh, shut it!"

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Old 01-03-2008, 12:13 PM   #29
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a very interesting read. I'm looking forward to more
*hugs* this is wonderful



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Old 02-03-2008, 01:55 PM   #30
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Yay more
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Old 10-03-2008, 09:38 PM   #31
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I'm sorry I haven't been able to post anymore. I have been diagnosed with CVS (Cyclic Vomiting Syndrome) and I really haven't been able to do much of anything. I have been writing more in the days I have been spending at home from school, so I will hopefully be able to post a decent update.

Thanks again for taking an interest in my work and I hope you enjoy the later installments.

Take care, stay safe.

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I think I might be addicted to Domo-kun.
"Let's go to Tokyo!"
Me:"Tokyo? But what about Japan?"
"Mer, you idiot...Tokyo is in Japan."
Me:"Really? Since when? OH...damn it..."
"How the hell do you have an IQ over 170?"
Me:"Oh, shut it!"

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Old 11-03-2008, 07:05 PM   #32
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^^ Hope your ok hun.. Your writing is brilliant! *sits patiently and waits for more*

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Old 11-03-2008, 11:59 PM   #33
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i love this story, you are really talented

i hope you're ok hunni

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Old 12-03-2008, 10:33 PM   #34
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*Sits and refuses to move*
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Love it!!!
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Old 13-03-2008, 03:06 PM   #35
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Old 14-03-2008, 12:09 PM   #36
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How ya feeling hun?? - Hope your feeling better and spending lots of time watching Day Time TV!!

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Old 15-03-2008, 09:45 PM   #37
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Aww, I feel special. Thank you so much for all the warm comments, they really help make me feel better. I have time to give you guys an update, so sit tight for a lil bit and I'll update the story for you.

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I think I might be addicted to Domo-kun.
"Let's go to Tokyo!"
Me:"Tokyo? But what about Japan?"
"Mer, you idiot...Tokyo is in Japan."
Me:"Really? Since when? OH...damn it..."
"How the hell do you have an IQ over 170?"
Me:"Oh, shut it!"

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Old 15-03-2008, 10:17 PM   #38
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*sits and wait patiently*

I still love it.

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Old 15-03-2008, 11:46 PM   #39
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She pulled me in for another hug.

"I missed you, girl!" She gave me a small peck on the lips.

"Ohh," Dan shouted, "keep going!"

Not even a second passed until Dan found himself face down on the floor again. Of course, leave it to Arhen to break the silence, cracking up like he always does. It didn't take long for his laughter to infect the rest of us. We all know that Dan has always joked about the way Mer is with her girl friends.

"So where did Sara and Seb run off to?" Arhen asked.

"Oh," Mer said, snapping out of her ballbreaker phase. "They went shopping for our little get together tonight. Food and horror movies."

"Yeah, we decided to split the couples up. It is quite apparent that nothing would get accompished if they were to stay together." Dan explained.

"Mer and Seb would've been too busy making out and groping each other!" Arhen cackled. Mer's eyes darted, her neck snapped to where she was facing Arhen. He leaped and cowered behind me. "Please don't kill me."

"Come on," I said, "let him off easy this time."

Her face contorted into a smile.

"Alright...only because you asked ever-so nicely."

"THANK YOU!" He yelped.

"Yeah, yeah, yeah," She mumbled.

"I'd hate to break up this love fest..." Dan spoke up, out of the blue. "We should go to Seb's room to get things ready." There was an assortment of grunts of agreement from the rest of us. Arhen grabbed my hand and laced his fingers with mine as we headed out of the foyer. As we were walking down the hallway, Dan turned around and took notice to us.

"When did this happen?" He asked.

"Oh," I gasped, "I really don't know."

"Well, it's about damn time!" Mer exclaimed, "you two have had googly eyes for each other for the longest time. We were all wondering when you guys would get together."

I smiled, feeling my face turning beet-red. I felt Arhen's arms come around my waist.

"She's all mine!" He claimed, "but you can make out with Mer whenever you want."

"I'm going to pretend I didn't hear that," Mer growled.

It's funny, Mer and Arhen argue all the time; but they are really close friends. They always fight, but that is how they show their affection torwards each other. They are like family, so alike, yet so different. One thing is for sure: I love em' both.

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Well, until next time. And remember to take care and be safe!

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"Let's go to Tokyo!"
Me:"Tokyo? But what about Japan?"
"Mer, you idiot...Tokyo is in Japan."
Me:"Really? Since when? OH...damn it..."
"How the hell do you have an IQ over 170?"
Me:"Oh, shut it!"

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