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Old 17-03-2017, 02:45 AM   #1
Megsta
 
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Poetry- the ocean.

Ocean.

Water stone cold, rocks so many years old,
Silver stars shine a dazzling light, as i walk beneath the sky of night.

At the planets i marvel, so perfectly round like marbles,
They glimmer and glow like fire, the tide rises higher and higher.

Waves wash upon the shore, they yell and they roar,
It is a navy blue, with a purple hue.

Pearls rest upon the sand, so do abalones and clams,
So beautiful it evokes every emotion, the ocean.


The sorrow and the joy.

That melancholy feeling,
Laughing while the ship sinks,
The sorrow and the joy.

Smiling, happy, glad,
All the while you're deeply sad,
The sorrow and the joy.

-unfinished.


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Old 28-03-2017, 11:50 AM   #2
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I really like this start. I see it's unfinished... I look forward to reading it when you're done.

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Soon... Now will be then...Today will be yesterday... Present will be past...And thought will be memory... So...Live for the future! Make your future how you want it!

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