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Old 10-10-2007, 03:20 PM   #1
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Triggering (Suicide) - A Second Chance

mommy, I'm writhing, can you help me?
I opened me up to let it out, so the pain would all go free

mommy, I'm hiding, can you see me?
there's blood everywhere, all here and there, covering my body

mommy, I'm hurting, can you fix me?
inside my head, all over the bed, it's flowing like a stream

mommy, I'm fighting, can you reach me?
I'm lying here, with all my fears, things are getting foggy

mommy, I'm dying, can you forgive me?
as I cry out for help, for everything else, life is such a tease

...baby, I'm here, now I've got you in my arms...
don't you cry, I'm by your side, it was just a false alarm...

baby, I'm with you, I'm holding you tight...
so much fear, to find you here, you gave me such a fright...

baby, I'm near you, I'm caressing your hand...
I'll do what I need to, to help you through, whatever I can...

baby, I'll stay here, I'm not leaving your side...
listen to me, whispering softly, keep your eyes open wide...

...mommy, are you listening, so glad that you are here...
don't you cry, I'm awake by your side, it's time to calm your fears

and mommy, are you listening, I've got a new life...
dry your tears, 'cause with you here, I'm going to do it right



here's to second chances, though not many are lucky enough to get them...
just some food for thought...
any feedback?

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Old 16-10-2007, 06:30 PM   #2
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this is awesome!!
really hit home!
you write beautifully!
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Old 16-10-2007, 07:48 PM   #3
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Aw that almost made me cry! That's really good.



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Old 16-10-2007, 08:40 PM   #4
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That's amazing.
Well done.
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Old 16-10-2007, 11:44 PM   #5
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wow, thanks all, really, thanks so much...

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Old 17-10-2007, 12:12 AM   #6
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i love it!
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Old 17-10-2007, 04:07 AM   #7
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*sob* wish my mum was that supportive :(
good poem
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“Nobody important? Blimey, that’s amazing. Do you know, in nine hundred years of time and space I’ve never met anyone who wasn’t important before.”
“If it’s time to go, remember what you’re leaving. Remember the best. My friends have always been the best of me.”

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Old 17-10-2007, 12:53 PM   #8
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amazin sooo good

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